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I thought you loved me.
I thought you would stay by me,
forever.
But you denied your feelings,
and my love.
You just closed your eyes,
and disappeared from my world.
Now you are gone,
     but I'm stuck here,
     Alone.
I cannot adore anyone else;
I love you too much.
Thus, you have sealed my fate
to die alone,
         Without You.
     My Greatest Fear
   Has Become Reality.
My Submission for Loose-Laces Poetry's 'Phobias' Contest. Yay.
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:iconcecsinger:
This is really good!!
i feel the same way bout someone right now though...
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:icondarkening-moon:
Thank you! And good luck with working that all out. :hug:
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:iconcecsinger:
Thanks. i think i will need it. and i really do love this. lots better than my work!!
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:icondarkening-moon:
Don't be so mean to yourself! I think writing just takes emotion, practice, and a heck of a lot of reading others' work. If I find something (like an emotion, picture, song, poem...) that inspires me, I just write how it makes me feel. That's my random bit of advice for today ;)
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:iconcecsinger:
yeah well i try but nothing ever turns out really good. im better with duct tape XD
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:icondarkening-moon:
*just went on your profile* Wow those flowers are amazing...*goes to fave*
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:iconcecsinger:
Thanks!! its the only thing im really good at anymore....
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:icondarkening-moon:
You should probably stop telling yourself that. Any little bit of self-loathing is hurtful, and it's often not even justified. As soon as you see that you are a wonderful person, life gets a thousand times better. :)
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